2011년 10월 3일 월요일

ESL Writing HW

I have a Jacket. It looks like trash, but it's important for me. It's old and black. my father gives me long time ago. It's the first present my father gave it to me. So, I think this cloth is important for me. This is very small size, so I cant wear it. Howerer, I don't discard it. It's the symbol between my father and me. When I see it, I think happy and satisfy. In old age, I will give it tyo my son.

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  1. Hello Daelyong,
    This is good writing. Be sure to get all your writing proofread carefully, and then double-check it again yourself before AND after 'publishing' here on your blog. Only your best work should be here, for all the world to read and enjoy.
    See you in class,
    j.w.

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